Great perspective training 2

lame mode : ON

sorry for the low quality CG here....
especially for the line art (I just edited the scanned sketch minimally, really lazy to refine it with pen tool)
I'm really to CG it in full potential (due to my gaming fever)

the only maximized CG is just the Background (is it seems maximized??)...
I'm trying to compare the perspective with the background and ended up like this, and I'm using some shaped brushes here but some of them is my original mouse made background! (guess it which ones!)

It's Ren Tzwinard from my Memory Line comic
he holds his special sword, the "Cling Sword" (okay, I knew It's a weird name for a sword)
and It's in the separated form sword...

I noticed something wrong in this perspective thing, could you tell me which ones coz I really don't know which ones I have to refine...

Comments, Critiques, and Questions are welcomed...

application used : Photoshop CS
tool used : mouse, polygon lasso, soft brush, shaped brush, smudge tool
line art CG : 0,5
full CG : 4
layer used : I didn't remember...